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Naruto vs Pein - Page 2

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From the fic Naruto: Melody of the Wanderers.

This is the second page, showing more around the ruins of Konohagakure and those who survived the aftermath of Pein's Shinra Tensei and invasion. Not to mention it shows the three main kunoichi, who (will occur later in the fic) have been fighting over Naruto's affections ever since he got back to Konoha at the start of the Shippuden Arc, picking themselves up after their part of the battle.

Of course, I figured maybe I should transform the fic from just being a Naruto/Tayuya, to a Naruto/Tayuya/Sakura/Hinata, I don't know. I'm still debating over it. I want to keep it small and not ruin it with too many pairings slammed together this time, I learned that the hard way.

Anyway, Hinata is helping Tayuya up with Sakura recovering in the background, and later discovering Naruto has returned to confront Pein. Whereas Tayuya (who has been with Naruto for most of his ninja career), expressed deep relief, joy and confidence at Naruto's return, Sakura and Hinata are a bit worried about the prospects of Naruto fighting. (Perhaps it's easier to understand why they are worried, is that just one of Pein's bodies was able to take down both Kakashi and Gai combined, but not kill them. It was Yahiko's body though, so it's not that surprising.)

More shall be explained in the fanfic... if I ever get up to this point. I just wanted to do the comic for the huge fight that will come.

Honestly, Naruto gets no good fight scenes in the manga at all, without either taking a beating, not having an awesomely detailed fight as Sasuke or Kakashi or Lee in the anime, or fighting completely under his own power without relying on Kyuubi, or being saved or aided.

All that God damn training in Sage Mode and he couldn't even beat Pein's last body without using the Nine-Tails to free himself. Nor was he able to successfully break out of the Sealing Chamber on that Turtle Island through just a handful of ninja guarding him, even though he was able to give Pein, the man who single-handedly destroy Konoha, a hard time?

Furthermore, he couldn't even beat the Raikage in a brief spar even though he is in Nine Tails Mode in the latest chapter? It's ridiculus! I wanted to see the God-damn Raikage get some sense beaten into him!

What the author is doing to Naruto is like putting a collar on Goku.

Everyone still treats Naruto like a child that needs to be leashed, even the author, and I'm sick of it.

Hope you all like this page...

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Kermitthefrog223456's avatar

Ironically I had Hinata defeat Tayuya in my fanfic.