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Naruto vs Pein - Page 2 by AlphaDelta1001 Naruto vs Pein - Page 2 by AlphaDelta1001
From the fic Naruto: Melody of the Wanderers.

This is the second page, showing more around the ruins of Konohagakure and those who survived the aftermath of Pein's Shinra Tensei and invasion. Not to mention it shows the three main kunoichi, who (will occur later in the fic) have been fighting over Naruto's affections ever since he got back to Konoha at the start of the Shippuden Arc, picking themselves up after their part of the battle.

Of course, I figured maybe I should transform the fic from just being a Naruto/Tayuya, to a Naruto/Tayuya/Sakura/Hinata, I don't know. I'm still debating over it. I want to keep it small and not ruin it with too many pairings slammed together this time, I learned that the hard way.

Anyway, Hinata is helping Tayuya up with Sakura recovering in the background, and later discovering Naruto has returned to confront Pein. Whereas Tayuya (who has been with Naruto for most of his ninja career), expressed deep relief, joy and confidence at Naruto's return, Sakura and Hinata are a bit worried about the prospects of Naruto fighting. (Perhaps it's easier to understand why they are worried, is that just one of Pein's bodies was able to take down both Kakashi and Gai combined, but not kill them. It was Yahiko's body though, so it's not that surprising.)

More shall be explained in the fanfic... if I ever get up to this point. I just wanted to do the comic for the huge fight that will come.

Honestly, Naruto gets no good fight scenes in the manga at all, without either taking a beating, not having an awesomely detailed fight as Sasuke or Kakashi or Lee in the anime, or fighting completely under his own power without relying on Kyuubi, or being saved or aided.

All that God damn training in Sage Mode and he couldn't even beat Pein's last body without using the Nine-Tails to free himself. Nor was he able to successfully break out of the Sealing Chamber on that Turtle Island through just a handful of ninja guarding him, even though he was able to give Pein, the man who single-handedly destroy Konoha, a hard time?

Furthermore, he couldn't even beat the Raikage in a brief spar even though he is in Nine Tails Mode in the latest chapter? It's ridiculus! I wanted to see the God-damn Raikage get some sense beaten into him!

What the author is doing to Naruto is like putting a collar on Goku.

Everyone still treats Naruto like a child that needs to be leashed, even the author, and I'm sick of it.

Hope you all like this page...

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SleepyMatt1994 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
I have one thing to say :

Tayuya's hat is awesome....I want it....
Skywardstrike1998 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
WTF Tayuya?! What are YOU doing here?
246vili Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
Yeah I know. If you don't read the fic, it's really confusing, but if you read it, you will know why is she in Konoha.
DreamingFantasy0 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
Rizaidym Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
I'm going to have to ask that you keep it strictly NaruTayu. Why? Because it is SO fucking hard to find a decent NaruTayu pairing. Which SUCKS because it's one of my favorites. Please post Chapter 19 soon!

A loyal fan.
simone-manga-ka Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
jkp1291 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
Oh dear god no don't make this a harem this is the one of the only naru/tayu fanfics that are really good don't ruin it by adding more girls to it just a one on on pairing, for once..... but other than that nice job conveying the damage and love how you made the Pein fight even more badass and paring problem or not cant wait to see the full fight in the fic
Theguraguraman Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I just saw a Ghost
Venomhand13 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011
So apparently Naruto or one of his Shadow Clones has come to help Hinata, which means they may end up finally talking after two years in real life.

I really hope Kishimoto doesn't decide to derail Hinata.
AlphaDelta1001 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011
Please, Kami no.
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